28 April 2009

Playing Card

Spin
spin
spin
fly
as the Jack
flies around the room
giving hair cuts to all
off the walls
off the floor
off the ceiling
out the door
through the hallway
into our class
spin
spin
spinning
past the students
extremely fast
into the face of the unknowing
unsuspecting
unwanting
unhappy
glowing red teacher.

Written by Game Boy, for Language Arts, April 2009, Grade 6.

3 comments:

LilKnitter said...

That's really good. I mean, seriously good writing.

I am really impressed!! Wow!

Grandma R said...

Wow, Gameboy, you have the writer's gene! I like the poem very much -- the imagery is so dramatic.

BBFM

Kate said...

I thought it was great--it really spoke to me. I thought I'd share.